The Hitchhiker Who Knew the Bridge Was Out
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He barely spoke. I tried the usual small talk — bad night for it, where are you headed, that sort of thing — and got single words back, or nothing, and settled into the silence, watching the road, which was treacherous, streaming, the wipers losing the fight. As we came to the fork — left for the river road and the old bridge, the quick way; right for the long way round by the top of the valley — I signalled left, out of habit, the fast route home.
'Not the river road,' he said. First full sentence he'd offered. 'The bridge is gone. Take the long way.'
I looked at him. He was staring straight ahead, water running off his hair, saying it flatly, with total certainty, a young man who'd told me nothing about himself now telling me the state of a bridge I'd crossed that morning and that was, as far as I knew, perfectly fine. I very nearly ignored him — the river road is fifteen minutes quicker and it was a foul night to add fifteen minutes — but there was something in the flatness of it, the certainty, that made my hand turn the wheel right instead, the long way, up the valley, in the rain, muttering to myself about picking up strange hitchhikers who give driving directions.
I dropped him at the edge of a village further round, and he thanked me again, quietly, and walked off into the rain toward houses whose lights I could see, and I drove home the long way feeling foolish and wet.
The river-road bridge had washed out. About an hour before I'd reached the fork, the swollen river had taken the old bridge — I heard it on the local news the next morning, saw the photos, the gap where the bridge had been, the barriers the council scrambled to put up after the fact. An hour before I got there. At the time my soaked hitchhiker told me flatly not to take the river road, the bridge was already gone, in the dark, in the storm, unmarked, unbarriered, a black gap over a raging river that I would have driven onto at speed, in the rain, at night, trusting a bridge that was no longer there.
I went back to that village to find him, to thank him, to ask how he'd known. Nobody there knew a young man matching him. Nobody had a soaked visitor arrive on foot that night. The houses I'd seen him walk toward belonged to people who'd been in all evening and seen no one. I don't know who he was, or how he knew, in the dark and the storm, that the bridge an hour up the road had already fallen into the river. I only know he told me, and I listened, barely, and that listening is the reason I'm here to write it down.
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